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| StyleWriter's
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most powerful way to edit any document |
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Call
StyleWriter up by clicking a button
in your word processor's toolbar.
StyleWriter displays all your editing
problems at the same time. As you begin
editing, StyleWriter offers intelligent
alternatives and sound advice to help
you edit your document into simple,
concise, plain English. With a split
screen of StyleWriter and your word
processor, you can go through your document
at your own pace. You can click on any
style or usage problem with your mouse,
or click back to your word processor
to edit your text.
StyleWriter
edits any document. Articles, press
releases, resumes and cover letters,
technical manuals, speeches, ads, sales
letters, proposals, legal documents,
corporate communications - you name
it, StyleWriter can help edit it. Within
seconds of launching, StyleWriter has
analyzed your documents for thousands
of style and English usage issues including:
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Complex
words
Overused words
Jargon/Abstract words
Wordy phrases
Passive verbs
Foreign words
Qualifying words
Confused hyphens
Clichés
Legal words
Long Sentences
Sentence Variety |
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Misused
Words
Confused Words
Hyphenation
Sexist Writing
Common Grammar Slips
Miscellaneous
Preferred Spelling |
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Without
StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have now completed
the majority of
our redrafting work conducted
on
an annual basis for
your management brochure
however a
number of
issues still
remain
to be
addressed before
it can
be sent for
printing.
I
have been
asked to follow-up
on a number of questions
that need to be
answered by
yourself or your
head of public affairs.
I
would be grateful if
you could give this matter
your urgent
attention. Should
you have any questions concerning
the information required,
please do not hesitate to
contact me.
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StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have completed most of this
year's redrafting work on
your corporate management
brochure. However, you need
to address some issues before
we print the brochure.
I need to follow up these
questions with you or your
head of public affairs.
Please
look at these issues urgently
and contact me if you need
more information.
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Words:
93
StyleWriter
suggested improvements 17:
6 wordy phrases
· 2 complex words
· 3 business clichés
· 5 passive verbs
· 1 long sentence
· 1 grammar error
(by yourself)
1 hyphenation error (follow-up)
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Words:
60
The
StyleWriter recommended
redraft is 60 words - 33
percent shorter.

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Full-screen
editing plus your word processor
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StyleWriter's
displays all of its editing advice at
once. You can expand the
screen to show a page of your document,
with each problem or issue highlighted.
The top of the screen shows you how
to edit your document into concise,
clear English. You can make most changes
by just clicking the blue alternative
shown. If you want to make more extensive
changes - and you will - just click
StyleWriter's Edit button and you're
in your familiar word processor with
all its advanced editing features.

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| Instant
analysis and ratings of every document |
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StyleWriter's
gives you instant, relevant analysis
and scores.
Most other writing aids offer you simplistic
readability formulas. These measure,
often inaccurately, your sentence length
and a syllable count to define long
words. There's more to good writing
than sentence length and word length.
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StyleWriter
has three key scores and ratings shown
at the bottom of the program's screen.
1.
The
Style Index - an overall score
of the clarity of your style.
2.
The
Average Sentence Length - an
important readability measure.
3.
The
Passive Index - a measure of
the most common writing problem.
Each score and rating becomes instantly
updated as you edit your document.
When
you edit with StyleWriter, you'll discover
that StyleWriter shortens sentences
and strengthens words. Readers can easily
take in and remember your message and
as they find your writing style easy
and understandable.

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| Fine-tuning
the analysis to your document |
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You
can adapt StyleWriter's analysis and
ratings to the type of document you're
drafting.
An advertisement needs to have a punchy,
direct writing style; a manual needs
to be clear and simple; a report can
carry more complex ideas. So you can
tell StyleWriter the type of document
you're drafting and it will alter its
analysis and ratings to reflect the
different styles expected. For example,
you'll get a higher Style Index and
stricter ratings if you tell StyleWriter
you're writing an advertisement rather
than a report.
Choose
from 12 writing tasks to fine-tune StyleWriter's
analysis.

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| See
an instant graph of sentence variety |
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StyleWriter
gives you an instant graph of your sentence
variety so you can see if you're mixing
long and short sentences to add interest
to your style. While short
sentences make easy reading, good writing
contains good sentence variety and a
readable average sentence length between
15 to 20 words. The program will even
pop-up a warning if your sentence average
drops below 12 words - a sign you're
taking the idea of short sentences too
far.

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Use
sentence variety to add interest to
your writing style.
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| See
a breakdown of your writing problems |
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Identify
your writing habits in every document.
The
left-hand side of StyleWriter's Category
Summary Screen shows the style problems
in document you're checking. You'll
find this a great way to know if your
style is passive and wordy, abstract
or stale.

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Use
StyleWriter's summary of writing issues
to identify your writing habits.
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| Add
advice to StyleWriter |
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You
can add advice to StyleWriter to increase
the power and accuracy of the program.
The more you use StyleWriter the more
your writing and editing skills improve.
Learning the main techniques of good
editors makes you think like an editor
and you'll soon spot other ways to improve
your writing. For example, suppose you
notice you are overusing the words 'provide',
'involve' and 'undertake',
you simply add them to the program and
ask the program to pop up some relevant
advice. It's as easy as using search
and replace on your word processor.
But StyleWriter searches for everything
you add and its 35,000 style and usage
patterns check every time you run the
program.
Add
any editing advice to StyleWriter

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| Delete
any advice that annoys you |
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Deleting
advice from the program is easy.
Anything that annoys you - perhaps because
it has a different industry-specific
meaning - you can easily remove.
Fine-tune
StyleWriter's advice to suit your writing
needs.

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| Make
context-sensitive exceptions |
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You
can make context-sensitive changes to
StyleWriter's advice to fine-tune it
to your own writing needs.
For example, StyleWriter suggests replacing
'purchasing' with 'buying'
to simplify your style. But what if
your job title is 'Purchasing Manager'?.
You can make 'purchasing manager'
an exception. Then every time StyleWriter
checks a document it highlights all
occurrences of 'purchasing' unless
the next word is 'manager'.
Fine-tuning
StyleWriter's advice is easy.

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| Review
the changes made to the program |
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StyleWriter
records any changes you make to the
program so you can review and even reverse
them. Most users delete or
make exceptions to between 10 and 50
of StyleWriter's 35,000 patterns. StyleWriter's
Review Changed Patterns feature
lets you view every change you've made.
Review
your changes to StyleWriter's database.

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| Bring
StyleWriter's power to your documents
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StyleWriter
looks for patterns in language and uses
wild cards to find thousands of variants
of problems in writing. This gives the
program immense searching power. StyleWriter
has 35,000 style and English usage checks
designed to reflect patterns in the
English language. For example:
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| Mr
Jones has reached
his decision and will
take his
retirement option next
year. |
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StyleWriter |
| Mr
James has decided
to retire
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Editors
recognise 'reached his decision'
and 'take retirement' as hidden
verb - expressions you can turn from
nouns to verbs to improve style, add
action and save words. Because StyleWriter
uses wild cards within its pattern searches,
it doesn't matter if you write 'reached
his decision', 'reaching different
decisions' or 'reached my decision'.
StyleWriter finds each variant hidden
verb and thousands of other possible
hidden verbs with just a few coded patterns.
StyleWriter,
by using wild cards to match with patterns
editors spot in text, is the world's
most powerful writing aid.
Bring
the power of StyleWriter to your writing.
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| Use
StyleWriter for different writing tasks
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You
can call up StyleWriter's extensive
help screens for different writing tasks.
Perhaps you have to write a sales letter
for the first time. Simply
click on StyleWriter's Writing Tips
and you'll find expert advice. You can
also call up this advice from your word
processor's help menu so it's available
when you first draft your document.

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StyleWriter
helps you tackle different writing tasks.
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| Use
StyleWriter's help screens for more editing
advice |
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If
you want more advice, just click your
mouse on the problem and up pops the
relevant help screen with more editing
advice.
For
example, if you've used a grammar checker
you'll notice it stops on passive verbs.
But you probably don't understand why
using passive verbs are a problem or
what to do with them. StyleWriter, with
its accurate and comprehensive search
for passive verbs, explains why passive
verbs are such a problem and shows you
simple techniques to switch them to
the shorter, more direct active style.

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Look
at this government example. Changing
the passive verbs (shown in red) into
active verbs (shown in blue) saves 18
per cent of the words.
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It
was
estimated by the research
that half of the states would
adopt the approach, and that savings
of up to $900 million a year would
be made.
However, to make sure these savings
are guaranteed
estimates will need to be
recalculated by the
Department of Labor for accuracy.
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StyleWriter |
The
research estimated
half of the states would adopt
this approach and could save
up to $900 million a year. The
Department of Labor will need
to recalculate
this estimate to guarantee
these savings are accurate.
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Switching
passive verbs to active verbs is easy
with StyleWriter's expert editing advice.
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| Keep
track of your improved writing skills |
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StyleWriter's
Statistical Archive lets you record
the word count, style index, average
sentence length and passive index of
every document.
StyleWriter records your scores when
it first checks the document (the original
draft score) and when you finished editing
(the redraft score). The Statistical
Archive lets you measure the improvement
you make to each document. By looking
at the original draft score, you can
see how your general writing standard
improves.

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StyleWriter
keeps a record of the writing scores
for every document checked.
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"StyleWriter
is like a crash course in professional editing.
It will not leave one's writing unchanged."
- Computers and the Law |
"Looking
back at the way I used to write press releases
I now understand why
editors didn't bother to publish them. StyleWriter
shows me how to write in the style newspaper
and magazine editors prefer. The result
is more free
exposure in the media."
- Chief Executive Officer |
"If
its a style checker you're after we'd plump
for StyleWriter. The rules are simple to
understand and it's a it's a doddle to use."
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What Personal Computer |
"Using
StyleWriter is a real
eye-opener. It gives instant
analysis and ratings for style, sentence
length and passive verbs. My style was consistently
rated poor until I started to follow the
program's advice. Now my writing is consistently
good and occasionally the program rates
it as excellent."
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Accountant |
"As
I edit, StyleWriter's analysis and ratings
of my document change. There's no better
encouragement to edit your draft than seeing
the improvement in your own scores. I now
constantly strive for three excellent ratings."
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University Lecturer |
"I
ran StyleWriter through my technical report.
The redraft was 30 percent shorter, simpler
and easier to read and understand. I'll
use StyleWriter on every document now."
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Technical Author |
"StyleWriter
really helped me during my Masters degree
with an 81 percent average. I am sure part
of that is due to StyleWriter making my
writing more readable and succinct."
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Student |
"StyleWriter's
the best thing since sliced sandwiches!"
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Journalist
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"I
work as a senior marketing manager at a
Fortune 500 company. StyleWriter showed
us we're not very good - no we're dreadful
- at communicating with our customers. Since
using StyleWriter, I've gained the skill
of writing clearly. It's like shining a
searchlight through a sea of corporate fog."
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Marketing Executive |
"For
me the best feature is adding to the program.
I have dozens of preferred spellings, alternatives
to industry jargon and words I want to avoid.
Adding my advice to the program means I
can check for all my editing issues in seconds."
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Newsletter Editor
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"You
could, for example, add technical words
or words used in your profession. I could
imagine the editor of a computer magazine
adding the word 'baud' to remind writers
it is often misused for 'bits per second.'"
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Freelance Journalist |
"Every
lawyer should use this software. I should
know - I've been practising law for 30 years."
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Lawyer |
"In
an ideal world, every technical writer would
have a copy of StyleWriter."
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The Manual |
"StyleWriter
constantly surprises me. Just when I think
I've produced the clearest possible draft,
it comes along and points out a few more
ways to improve my style or picks out a
hyphenation or word choice error."
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Subeditor |
"There's
more good advice in StyleWriter's help screens
than on any $200 business writing course.
The screens summarize the key points of
the best writing techniques and give me
the confidence to tackle any writing task."
- Training Officer |
"Once
I followed StyleWriter's advice and switched
passive verbs into active verbs, my writing
became shorter, clearer and less ambiguous.
StyleWriter's advice on passive verbs alone
is worth the price of the program."
- Government Administrator |
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"I'm
from the Wall Street Journal and I need
a copy of StyleWriter."
"Do
you want to review the package?"
"No.
I need it for everything I write."
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Press Journalist
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