Essay - Admission Essay Want to Transfer from Xxx University School to...

ADMISSION ESSAY want to transfer from XXX University School to YYY ***** because I believe that YYY University offers a cosmopolit*****n environment ***** various bodies of students. ***** am a 21-ye*****r female from AAAA, visited in the United States ***** year 2001 for getting higher education. While I planned to get my ***** from New York *****, but because ***** the 9-11th devastation in New ***** due to the terrorist attack, on the ********** of my parents, I entered Bost***** University, School of Management.

Though I hoped ***** eventually I would transfer to New York University, because ***** knew that New York University would be the best choice for my educational and as well career goals. It is well know ***** New ***** University offers a highly rigorous curriculum in bus*****ess. More importantly, New York provides a vivacious ***** cosmopolitan environment and evokes a high level of belongingness for *****ll—natives, foreigners, locals, and American citizens.

A entered in *****on University in Fall 2001. After couple of semesters I was diagnosed with ADHD, resulting two bad grades. However, ***** was determined to do better and finally was able to control ***** ADHD with the help ***** my *****ctors, following a highly controlled regimen. In the senior level, I received three A- *****. At th***** time, however, I did not attempt to transfer, because ***** treatment in the University Hospital at Bos*****n University ***** not yet completed.

***** ***** am ***** motivated, strong-minded, and energetic woman, somehow, I ***** finding that Boston University does not suit to my loneliness, as most of ***** students are ***** ***** the environment seems more like that of small American town. *****n contrast, I have heard through my friends as well as researched my own that ***** York University consists ***** diverse bodies of students from almost all parts ***** ***** world. ***** believe that in this kind of environment I would be a good fit and would even do better in my education.

As may be clear from above, my ma***** weakness lies in my loneliness. Somehow before moving to the United States, I never imagined ***** pain of the loneliness. Because in my home country I always lived in a l*****rge family, where each one w***** able to share responsibilities and re*****ards, presently in Bos*****n I miss these occasions. By nature I am a te*****m-person and ***** to work in collaboration; I believe that New ***** University, ***** especi*****y, New York ********** me several such opportunities ***** share responsibilities and rewards.

********** sum, I am confident of my abilities to perform academically better and achieving my academic ***** of graduating in Finance from ***** York University. I ensure that should an opportunity be provided to me to study in New York University, I will consider this as my time to ***** ***** best and shine ***** and in other honorable activities. In addition, my strong mathematics, business, and science background and ***** inclination toward a "people" person, provide me several ***** to be successful